passable. Porn video Age? I found it hard to go with this story when I couldn’t decide what she looked like with the so little description you gave. but im probably one of the only ones.«12» love rape and bestialityAnonymous readerReport 2009-12-05 04:30:54good plot, but work on your formatting. I found it hard to go with this story when I couldn’t decide what she looked like with the so little description you gave. but as much as id hate to admit it. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 02:12:03Other than such comments mentioned I think you need to work on character design, ok we get it the girl is goth and she is wearing a nice dress, what does she look like?
