You could change this a lot and it would be a good story as you seem to have talent. XXX Incest can be a hot topic,but not done with such a mean way as this story. Incest can be a hot topic,but not done with such a mean way as this story. I have read some stories where there is domination and humiliation and makes me want to see the younger or weaker boy find a way to get revenge. It’s good because it’s fiction if it was real that would be fucked upanonymous readerReport 2013-09-17 02:05:52You mean the guy 7 below youanonymous readerReport 2013-09-17 01:59:34For the first guy with your imagination you could write the sequel.
