You’re stories are “NOW” 9.5/10 and as I’m about 1/2 way through them now I think they are getting better than they were before, as time progresses.Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-20 13:23:23Yeah, must agree about the double-spacing, spelling errors, poor grammar, but I DO LIKE YOUR STORIES. Tube8 This is undoubtedly the WORST example of spacing that I ever saw. I can understand you being pissed off with the criticism you get; just understand that improvement best comes by responding to criticism, without criticism one tends to become delusional about one’s abilities, adopting an aura of self-perceived perfection. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-17 16:40:25The last person’s post I fully agree with & think exactly what/how they said it.




















