You’ve given me a headache with your utter stupidity you ridiculous cretin!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:35:15Ok a comment. It was a cute story. Tube8.com This was just absolute shit, if you consider writing another story take my advice… As others have said, spelling, grammar, and format are important, but you have an interesting storyline going that you can continue to work with. But you should let someone else write the final draft for you. Honestly this ranks in the top five if the worst stories I have ever seen posted on the web anywhere!!! Do everyone a favor, quit posting ignorant shit like this and leave writing to those who have at least a basic understanding of the English language.
