You seriously need to get an English speaking person to proof read for you before you post anything. Tube8.com Idea and concept are great, execution is horrible.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 23:19:03You separated the big block of text but the story is still filled with wrong words and words that are out of order. (LEARN ENGLISH)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 23:37:40So are you your sister hero? Which raises the question as to why are you posting stories then?«1» So how are you your sisters hero and her boyfriends hero? So it is still a pain in the ass to try and read. But I’m sure its yet another example of using the wrong word, which this story is full of. You seriously need to get an English speaking person
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