It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Tube8.com Post corrections.«1» Post corrections.«1» Post corrections.«1» Post corrections.«1» Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Use more euphonisms or none at all. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal.
