You just need someone who can proofread for you. Tube8 It generally reads better. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-09 13:10:48i did not get the story the sex parts were okay but needed too be more eroticAnonymous readerReport 2010-06-01 15:53:46Awsome story though wat happened to the twins and did she get killed you should do anotherAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:43:50Realy GOOD story. You just need someone who can proofread for you. It generally reads better. If they truly are interested in your stories, I’m sure they would be glad to help you. You just need someone who can proofread for you. It generally reads better. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-09 13:10:48i did not get the story the sex parts were okay but needed too be more eroticAnonymous readerReport 2010-06-01 15:53:46Awsome story though
