I like and prefer “good guy”, “hero” stories, especially when the assholes get what they deserve. Tube8 Idea of the story is great hopefully you have more ideas similar to this and you proofread and fix your future works before posting them. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:02:10Nice story despite misspellings. Not a great attempt for a first try plenty of room for improving.«1» I like and prefer “good guy”, “hero” stories, especially when the assholes get what they deserve. Wish there was more description in the beatings the assholes got and the after effects and reactions of others at the party, but maybe you’ll give us more in your next attempt.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 12:21:29While I applaud your effort. I like and prefer “good guy”, “hero”
