Please stick to past or present, too disturbing otherwise.Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-25 00:41:00movie theatre?Anonymous readerReport 2008-12-05 10:54:08dude this is great keep writingjgame316Report 2008-10-26 23:46:40If you read the series you see why I went this route. …will have chapter 5 soon. XXX 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-08 00:31:23gramar ruined it, and i thought it was suppose to be at a movier theaterAnonymous readerReport 2009-05-23 09:51:32Ok writing but having up to three tenses in the one paragraph I found too off-putting. Please stick to past or present, too disturbing otherwise.Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-25 00:41:00movie theatre?Anonymous readerReport 2008-12-05 10:54:08dude this is great keep writingjgame316Report 2008-10-26 23:46:40If you read the series you see why I went this route. …will have chapter 5 soon.
