lolanonymous readerReport 2011-04-05 11:33:45I know that this is your first story and all that, but you need to proofread what you have written BEFORE you post it! Tube8.com Please, use capitals, dots and proper English and re-write this.«1» I just couldn’t finish it. Fix’manonymous readerReport 2011-04-04 16:22:56I’m very sorry but it was just terrible to read. lolanonymous readerReport 2011-04-05 11:33:45I know that this is your first story and all that, but you need to proofread what you have written BEFORE you post it! lolanonymous readerReport 2011-04-05 11:33:45I know that this is your first story and all that, but you need to proofread what you have written BEFORE you post it!
