I loved the plot but your grammar culd use some tuning up and the age of the kid seems a bit old for his personality but i hope you take this into consideration and i hope that theres more stories from you!anonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 17:14:40This is shite mate, this story sucks dog bollocks!!!!!«123» I loved the plot but your grammar culd use some tuning up and the age of the kid seems a bit old for his personality but i hope you take this into consideration and i hope that theres more stories from you!anonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 17:14:40This is shite mate, this story sucks dog bollocks!!!!!«123» Just go away.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-05 00:40:39Very hot, write more!anonymous readerReport 2013-06-05 00:15:14That was great! Porn I agree he’s writing his own
