if you can’t fix your own mistakes, try using a grammar checker, PLEASE!«12» Cm onanonymous readerReport 2013-08-26 22:22:09Holy shit that sucked, learn English and how to format…stupid fartknocker!!animal99Report 2013-08-14 17:20:58I wish i could say this was a Good story… if you can’t fix your own mistakes, try using a grammar checker, PLEASE!«12» Cm onanonymous readerReport 2013-08-26 22:22:09Holy shit that sucked, learn English and how to format…stupid fartknocker!!animal99Report 2013-08-14 17:20:58I wish i could say this was a Good story… XXX I’m sure you can re-read this, correct your mistakes and re-post it. … but your run-on sentences and improper punctuation did me in! 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-02 01:03:15Yes, sentence structure needs help.
