Maybe you should rewrite in and take your time.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-13 12:04:04very goodanonymous readerReport 2013-09-20 16:27:56I like it , but you should capitalize the beginning of sentences and proper names. The final thing is Cho is a year ahead of Harry, so for her to be there it would need to be his 6th year or expand upon Cho falling apart and failing a year after C Cedric died. Tube8 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-04 17:24:20Seems like written froh a tun year old. There is a few spelling mistakes, but nothing major. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-04 17:24:20Seems like written froh a tun year old.
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