8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-31 11:14:58no paragraphs and you started in the middle of the story this shoould have been chapter two out of three delete and rewrite and use a good editor from now onanonymous readerReport 2011-04-20 20:54:58EVER HEARD OF PARAGRAPHS ? I know of only one man that made his wife remain nude while in the house. Porn Hard to imagine the son and daughter having enough energy after all the sex activity, to play sports of any kind. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-31 11:14:58no paragraphs and you started in the middle of the story this shoould have been chapter two out of three delete and rewrite and use a good editor from now onanonymous readerReport 2011-04-20 20:54:58EVER HEARD OF PARAGRAPHS ?
