Damn, I love it it’s so believable!! 19 comments«1234»Norton5Report 2013-11-20 17:06:35I found it interesting how the protagonist reacted to the big guy being bullied by those jocks, particularly his concern over the notice on the school site. XXX Glad to see the comments from Derek and the hostility with the dad, but also glad to see it get settled. A lot of detail in this story. Other than that I’m working on putting these out one every week if possible.«1234» The way you present her makes it seem like it could be a real person who has gone mad!!! Still don’t like the ‘forgiving attitude’ with Loretta, but it appears you’ve turned the story back around and have it heading in the right direction
