Keep at it and you will improve the technical aspects.«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-20 13:03:34rape story improperly labled IF YOU PUT ANY KIND OF RAPE OR FORCED SEX IN YOUR STORIES YOU HAVE TO WARN THE READERS NOW DELETE THIS TRASH AT ONCEanonymous readerReport 2011-05-26 20:22:55What a mess! It got me hard and that is why I read these stories. Porn It got me hard and that is why I read these stories. Keep at it and you will improve the technical aspects.«1» Written by a 3rd grader with so many misspellings and grammar errors mading it difficult to read!anonymous readerReport 2011-05-26 10:57:32Thankfully I am not critical of the technical aspects and was able to follow the story really well.
Actors:
Katrina Jade / Pov Joe
