its a good story I liked it.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 13:36:15waaaaaaaaay toooooooooooo shoooooooorrrrrrrttttt!!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 22:21:19build up to it a little bit more…it seemed like one minute you had neighbors and next you were giving a blowjob? XXX And as everyone else has told you, you need to use paragraphs too. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! hah and again…paragraphsAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 00:42:33paragraphs pleasefbaileyReport 2008-08-30 12:44:59You really need to use a spell checker and then you need to proofread your work before submitting it. its a good story I liked it.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 13:36:15waaaaaaaaay toooooooooooo shoooooooorrrrrrrttttt!!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 22:21:19build up to it a little bit more…it seemed like one minute you had neighbors and next you were giving a blowjob?
