Anyway, I really liked your story. Porn video It’s labeled “Dark Fantasy”. I am not tearing you down or anything, but your style feels rushed and even a quick look-over before posting would benefit your writing. I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. I guess I just read your stories because you seem to have great ideas, but you just lack the skill at getting them down. It’s labeled “Dark Fantasy”. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-10 06:58:29poor writing and story telling skillsm but good ideas. I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting. I am not tearing
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