Japanese Schoolgirl’s Desk-shattering Climax

you need to proofread, edit, capitalize, punctuate, spell check, etc, etc, etc. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-31 21:46:04Good story.READERReport 2007-06-10 14:19:22meh, its okREADERReport 2007-04-13 10:51:50i love the idea of fucking a tutor but all i get is a teacher and heaps of my sisters friends and a few random girls at parties. XXX . . . …READERReport 2007-03-19 09:57:41bad spelling and shit but overall good storyREADERReport 2006-11-25 20:48:08you were certainly right when you said you were “never the sharpest tool in the shed” and it seems to be reflected in your writing. you need to proofread, edit, capitalize, punctuate, spell check, etc, etc, etc.