In the next story maybe?anonymous readerReport 2011-04-10 19:14:03would love for the stories in this series to be longer…they are too short
~Aanonymous readerReport 2011-03-09 08:32:34Excellent story!! XXX Helpful hints:
Spend a little more time developing the story and character’s own backstory, take longer between posting the stories if necessaryn
Don’t be afraid to get more detailed
And finally, your first story had a lot of descriptors and backstory, I think you need to spend more timedeveloping Jessie’s character and past. Helpful hints:
Spend a little more time developing the story and character’s own backstory, take longer between posting the stories if necessaryn
Don’t be afraid to get more detailed
And finally, your first story had a lot of descriptors and backstory, I think you need to spend more timedeveloping Jessie’s character and
