And i can’t even tell whos talking half the time i can barly read this 1/10READERReport 2006-09-15 18:47:39Not bad, although you need to improve the wording and the typos in your story, that’d make it much smoother to read. XXX Please tell us more.klaxxReport 2009-02-02 22:11:59″TO BE CONTINUDE” *snork*
Sounds like Engrish.READERReport 2008-02-25 19:18:18Wow terrible i cant even read it its called paraghraphs. … Please tell us more.klaxxReport 2009-02-02 22:11:59″TO BE CONTINUDE” *snork*
Sounds like Engrish.READERReport 2008-02-25 19:18:18Wow terrible i cant even read it its called paraghraphs. … And i can’t even tell whos talking half the time i can barly read this 1/10READERReport 2006-09-15 18:47:39Not bad, although you need to improve the wording and the typos in your story, that’d make it much smoother to read.
