I don’t mind the misspelled words, etc., it is natural to the idiom of this story and adds to my belief that it is a “true story”.Emma123Report 2010-12-25 13:31:17The relationship between Rave and Faye is great, their lovemaking was romantic and so SEXY, really turned me on! I love that you write in “real speak”, so natural. Porn Your description of characters and events are very clear so vivid and so real, I have feelings for each character. I don’t mind the misspelled words, etc., it is natural to the idiom of this story and adds to my belief that it is a “true story”.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-05 03:38:47one of my favorites, keep it up«1»
