Some paragraphs a little long; still easy reading. Tube8 Some paragraphs a little long; still easy reading. But otherwise, the story was very well done.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-01 00:23:26needs proof reading, there’s words missing and bad grammer in places…other than that it’s a great story, or the start of a good series…8/10
btw, what the hell is a whewhooo?«12» 7 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2021-01-21 00:05:06Enjoyed, too! 7 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2021-01-21 00:05:06Enjoyed, too! 7 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2021-01-21 00:05:06Enjoyed, too! KEEP WRITING; any 3 could be extended to a series. Very göod works. Well if you are a midget it might happen. Well if you are a midget it might happen. Some paragraphs a little long; still easy reading. Refresing new author & stories. Some paragraphs a little long; still easy reading.
